Mini case · rust

The brand that explained itself to death

A brand loses information per sentence and gains meaning per interaction.

A clay vessel almost buried beneath blank labels and red thread
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Composite / illustrative
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The problem

A young brand wanted every sentence to communicate purpose, ingredients, provenance, differentiation, philosophy and founder story.

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The result

Nothing sounded untrue. Nothing sounded alive either.

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The move

Each message was given one job.

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The effect

The brand lost information per sentence and gained meaning per interaction.

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The question

How much of your communication exists because the organisation is afraid somebody might misunderstand it?

Margin note

COMPOSITE / ILLUSTRATIVE — not a named client case.

Source & provenance

COMPOSITE / ILLUSTRATIVE

Illustrative synthesis. Not represented as client work.

Provenance type
composite case
Confidence
editorial

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